KK Story I Intend to Begin Working On

[Ranman]

wow ok, let us judge that lets see a pic

[Swordsman]

...agreed.

[Pearl]

Well not really me, but the Pearl in the story does. She also has a 32 inch waist and is a size three in sneakers.

Keira meets her, falls in love, they have tons of test tube babies. The end.

[Ranman]

Sorry nsper7, we kind of destroyed your thread

[Swordsman]

His story was pretty bad so... i wouldn't say "destroyed".

[Rob The BLack Douglas]

Having read some nspers work in the past, this one willbe a big stinking pile of poo, that is if he managed to finish it. Plus at some point, a very moral figure based on nsper himself spouting the stupid nonsence of Pat Robertson and other idiots who give christians a bad name would appear and the women would alll jezebels to taunt the pious young man, who finds any type of sex other than that to procreate to be disgusting and sinful.

Put in a bunch of rabid monkys shooting up with heroin and I might read it.

Rob

[nsper7]

Sparrow's no moralist in this story, more of a Boss Tweed-wannabe with delusions of grandeur. His goal is to build-up territory for himself in a Post-Pandemic nation. He uses Keira Knightley because of her popularity, but that is all.

[Rob The BLack Douglas]

Dude give it up, you have never finished a single story, that I know of, and while you talk a good game, your writing has no soul, technically competent, you lack emotion, we feel nothing when we read your work. You write for a very limited audience, and we are not it.

Rob

[Swordsman]

That was ice cold, yet brutally true.

[Rob The BLack Douglas]

Originally Posted by Swordsman

That was ice cold, yet brutally true.

That was me playing nice. Nsper knows damn well how I feel aboot him. We've gone a few rounds in the past. Just watch, soon he'll try to pander to what he thinks everyone wants to read all the while telling about all his wonderful ideas based on whatever story/theory one of his instructors happens to be spouting off aboot.

He gets an A for effort but flunks everything else.

Rob

[Leonie]

Originally Posted by Rob The BLack Douglas

That was me playing nice. Nsper knows damn well how I feel aboot him. We've gone a few rounds in the past. Just watch, soon he'll try to pander to what he thinks everyone wants to read all the while telling about all his wonderful ideas based on whatever story/theory one of his instructors happens to be spouting off aboot.

He gets an A for effort but flunks everything else.

Rob

Hey, back off a bit. Just because you think his writing isn't good doesn't mean you need to tell him that! As such a driven writer yourself, you should know that the only way to improve is to keep writing. You're not wearing a "judge" badge, so back off.

What you say may very well be true, you probably know this guy better than I, but give him a chance. Don't like it? Don't read it.

[Ranman]

And if you have a problem with Leonie I'll come to your
house and lift your kilt and smash you in the Nads with
Hasselbrads favorite wedge.

[nsper7]

And if you have a problem with Leonie I'll come to your
house and lift your kilt and smash you in the Nads with
Hasselbrads favorite wedge.

*cringes just thinking about that*

[nsper7]

Well, I posted the prelude/prologue and first chapter of a non-KK story that involved good old Victor Sparrow.

[Rob The BLack Douglas]

Originally Posted by Ranman

And if you have a problem with Leonie I'll come to your
house and lift your kilt and smash you in the Nads with
Hasselbrads favorite wedge.

Why would I have a problem? Just tossing in what I KNOW aboot Nsper and in the context of the thread, I have not gotten personal, though I do admit part of my animosity has to do with his actions towards some people i care aboot, and no I won't be reading his work.

And Leonie just for your info in the past Nsper has asked me for my opinion aboot his writings, he just doesn't care to hear it.

Rob

[nsper7]

Why would I have a problem? Just tossing in what I KNOW aboot Nsper and in the context of the thread, I have not gotten personal, though I do admit part of my animosity has to do with his actions towards some people i care aboot, and no I won't be reading his work.

And Leonie just for your info in the past Nsper has asked me for my opinion aboot his writings, he just doesn't care to hear it.

Rob

You'll notice I didn't make any negative responses to your comments. You have a right to your opinion and I know I need to improve my writing skills, but Leonie is right, the only way to improve is to keep on writing and getting feedback, positive or negative.

Also, I am sorry if anything I said ever offended or angered you, but when you start a debate when people who have very strong, yet opposing, beliefs, then you're asking for a fight. I also wish to assure that this current story does not involve KK, NP or any other real actor/actress. Their maybe references to real people, but all my characters are original (although maybe based on real people).

Can we agree to a truce?

*offers hand to shake Rob's*

[Leonie]

Originally Posted by Rob The BLack Douglas

Why would I have a problem? Just tossing in what I KNOW aboot Nsper and in the context of the thread, I have not gotten personal, though I do admit part of my animosity has to do with his actions towards some people i care aboot, and no I won't be reading his work.

And Leonie just for your info in the past Nsper has asked me for my opinion aboot his writings, he just doesn't care to hear it.

Rob

If that's what you call "not getting personal" then I'd hate to hear you when you are

Constructiveness is the key, my friends. Now smile and hold hands.

[Digital_Ice]

/me toasts marshmallows on the flames...

[Jess]

my gosh nsper. do you never quit with your terrible kk fanfics. they were bad when u were on kf and the story is pretty shite now. get a grip man. if ur guna write stories..leave keira out of them..especially if they're political. my goshness!!!

mel

[nsper7]

Keira is not in the most recent story I just posted.