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Join Date: Sep 2005
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Journey's End(Screenplay)
This is an unproofed copy of the screenplay I submitted to a state sponsored compitition, it wasn't selected to be a finalist, why i don't know though it is a controversial topic to some.
Journey's End Interior of a bedroom in an apartment. Queen size bed, a pile of clothes sits next to a basket filled with neatly folded clothes. A Keira Knightley poster hangs on one wall. A stereo sits on the small dresser. A nightstand sits next to the bed with a lamp, a clock, and a phone next to it. The clock shows 3 AM or so. The bed is occupied by Angus Douglas and his girlfriend. They are asleep, their breathing slow and regular. The phone by the bedside begins to ring. And ring. And ring. Angus ignores the phone and curls up closer to his girlfriend. The phone keeps ringing. ANGUS’ GIRLFRIEND ARE YOU GOING TO ANSWER THAT? Sighing Angus rolls over and grabs hold of the phone. ANGUS THIS HAD BLOODY WELL BE GOOD. VOICE ON PHONE ANGUS? IT’S LARA......I JUST HEARD ABOUT.......... IT’S JULIA....... Angus sits up in the bed and turns on the light next to the bed. ANGUS NO, SHE DIDN’T...... LARA YEAH, HER FUNERAL WAS TWO DAYS AGO. HER FAMILY DIDN’T WANT ME TO BE THERE. ANGUS WHAT CAN I DO FOR YOU SIS? LARA I....I...I REALLY WANT TO SAY GOODBYE. (Lara is crying on the other end of the line her sobs inyerupt her words as she speaks) ANGUS I CAN PICK YOU UP IN THE MORNING AND TAKE YOU. Lara is silent on the other end for several long pauses. ANGUS YOU OK LARA? (Faint sobs can be heard) LARA(Sobbing) NO I’M NOT OK! SHE’S GONE DAMNIT! HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL! CHRIST! ANGUS(Sighs softly) I’M COMING OVERE RIGHT NOW. LARA NO...YOU DON’T NEED TO... I WON’T DO ANYTHING STUPID. I’LL BE OK. ANGUS DON’T GIVE ME THAT. LARA I’LL BE OK, REALLY. JUST MEET ME IN THE MONING TO DRIVE ME TO THE CEMETARY. Lara hangs up on Angus. Angus sighs and slowly hangs up the phone. His girlfriend looks at him curiously. ANGUS’ GIRLFRIEND EVERYTHING OK? ANGUS NO, IT’S NOT. Angus reach’s over and turns out the light and wraps his arms about his girlfriend and they drift off to sleep. Interior Lara’s home. Lara Douglas is fully dressed, it is obvious that she has not been sleeping and that she has been crying. Lara is Angus’ step-sister and they do not resemble each other. Lara is of mixed race and is an attractive young woman. She is holding a hankie in her hands, twisting it with her fingers. exterior Angus pulls up to the home his car fairly new, nothing fancy, i.e. Toyota Corolla. Angus steps from his car. He is dressed casually, dark polo shirt and a plain solid color kilt, thick wool socks rolled down to the tops of his black boots. Lara opens the door and wraps her arms about Angus hugging him. LARA(whispering) THANKS BRO. ANGUS YOU READY? LARA I THINK SO. The next three scenes will be intercut with shots of the car traveling, a way to get shots of New Mexico scenery. All three scenes deal with Lara’s and Julia’s relationship. There isn’t any dialouge, all the emotions come from the actor’s performance. SHORT SCENE 1 A very shy Lara gazes with longing at Julia from afar. Julia is smiling and happy, obviouslyenjoying herself and the conversation of those around her. Sighing Lara turns away and slumps off despondant. She does not see Julia watching her walk away. SHORT SCENE 2 Lara and Julia are walking, holding hands. It is night, they are laughing and smiling, obviously having a good time. It begins to rain, pouring down rain, hard. Lara and Julia are soaked. Together they run for shelter. Standing together they gaze into each others eyes, before they passionately kiss. SHORT SCENE 3 Lara is in tears. Julia is being held by her mother who looks upset and very distrought. Julia’s father is angry, full of rage, his eyes wild as he jabs his finger menacingly at Lara as he shouts at her. With a sharp gesture Julia’s father indicates that Lara must leave. Slowly with head bowed, tears running down her cheeks, she turns away and walks out the door. She doesn’t see Julia crying, shove her mother and rush out of the room. The cemetetary Angus and Lara are walking among the graves, Lara clinging to Angus for support. They approach Julia’s grave. Angus stops and Lara continues walking slowly until she is in front of Julia’s tombstone. Lara’s cheeks are streaked with tears as she sinks to her knee’s. LARA I’M SORRY I WASN’T THERE FOR YOU LOVE. I NEVER STOPPED LOVING YOU. I WROTE YOU LETTERS EVEN TOUGH YOU PROBABLY NEVER GOT THEM. YOUR PARENTS WROTE ME ONCE SAYING THAT YOU WERE FREE OF ME AND THAT YOU HAD MOVED ON. Lara sobs and wipes the tears from her face. LARA I COULDN’T STOP LOVING YOU IF I TRIED. EVEN AFTER ALL THE YEARS THAT WENT BY, I NEVER GAVE UP, ALWAYS HOPING FOR A LETTER, OR A PHONE CALL. LARA I EVEN DARED DREAM OF ONE DAY OPENING MY FRONT DOOR TO SEE YOU STANDING THERE SMILING. Lara lowers her head and breaks out into uncontrollable sobs, her hair covering her face. LARA(whispering) I LOVE YOU JULIA. I ALWAYS WILL. Lara slowly stands and walks back to Angus who had been waiting anxiously, his face full of concern. he wraps his arms around Lara hugging her, not letting go. FIN
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Voted Best!
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: DIY LV
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i dig it, keep it up man.
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That's not proper screenplay format. That's probably why it didn't make it to the finalists.
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