Drawing of Keira - Page 3

22-07-2004, 04:24 AM

Not bad, but the neck needs to be WAY thinner, alot less chin, her face needs to get thinner towards the bottom as well, the bridge of her nose needs to be thinner as well, eyes could be a tad lower, give her some ears, eyes are supposed to be an eye width apart... thats about it

Try a few drawings that focus on her outline and not on value (shading)

also compare the actual picture to your drawing and try to see what you could improve on

Ardnax · 22-07-2004, 05:14 PM

You actually see a bit of one ear if it would have been a better scan and you can't see the other ear in the real pic either.

23-07-2004, 07:23 PM

It was really a great drawing of Keira from the premiere of Pirates of the Carribean exept from her face, but the rest was like looking at a picture

Ardnax · 23-07-2004, 09:02 PM

I drawed the first pic from a VERY small pic so I couldn't see the details in the face, I should have done only the stomach then.

jadie · 26-07-2004, 06:51 PM

lovely picture! it's way better than I could do.

Kelsey · 27-07-2004, 08:20 AM

Good job Ardnax! Thanks for sharing them; keep them coming.

And for those of you dissing it, let's see your drawings

Hazzle · 28-07-2004, 12:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kelsey

And for those of you dissing it, let's see your drawings

I consider it constructive criticism not dissing. And no...you're all unworthy and I'm too fucking lazy

Ardnax · 03-08-2004, 06:04 PM

Here is a new one, bad scan tho. :icon_redf

Sarah · 03-08-2004, 06:55 PM

I don't think it looks an awful lot like Keira, but I do think it is very good. You've got her eyebrows right and your shading is coming along nicely. Keep practising and you'll soon have a spitting image of Keira.

Jacoby · 03-08-2004, 07:09 PM

Yes, they're getting better and better. Good work. Keep practicing as Sarah has said. Keep posting them too.

DefyingGravity · 03-08-2004, 07:35 PM

Well, at least you can tell who they are.

Renegade · 03-08-2004, 11:48 PM

A little work on the chin and cheek structure and it'll be fine. You'll definitely improve with every drawing. Keep em coming and eventually you'll hit the spot. Good work

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Hazzle · 04-08-2004, 12:28 AM

Improvement made...room for further improvement.

duckula · 04-08-2004, 09:28 AM

Still looks like a man.

deviljet88 · 04-08-2004, 09:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by duckula

Still looks like a man.

Doesn't look like Keira at all, but saying its a man is a bit harsh lol

Ardnax · 10-08-2004, 05:12 PM

Here's one I made today.

keira loves lipgloss · 10-08-2004, 06:01 PM

great drawing,keep up the good work

AureaMediocritas · 10-08-2004, 06:03 PM

You are getting better ! Nice picture except perhaps for the teeth that remind
me a bit of lettuce and carrot eaters

... Anyway , if I had to draw such a
piece , you would definitely have something to laugh at for hours , so don't be shy and keep them coming !!!

duckula · 10-08-2004, 11:44 PM

Ok, movement has been made towards making it look female but seemingly at the cost of making it look severely retarded. Keep up the fine work.

Hazzle · 11-08-2004, 01:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by duckula

Ok, movement has been made towards making it look female but seemingly at the cost of making it look severely retarded. Keep up the fine work.

What he said...but in a bid to be less harsh...you're making minor improvements...which can't be bad...teeth are the REALLY bad bit...top half of the picture isn't so bad...jaw is still kinda fucked.

26-07-2004, 06:51 PM	#45
jadie Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: land of the lumple pumpkins Posts: 62	lovely picture! it's way better than I could do. __________________ im rad. youre rad. lets hug

27-07-2004, 08:20 AM	#46
Kelsey Holly Moderator Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Wild Wild West Posts: 1,188	Good job Ardnax! Thanks for sharing them; keep them coming. And for those of you dissing it, let's see your drawings __________________ ~* Kelsey *~ Check out my blog: http://www.thingsephemeral.blogspot.com

03-08-2004, 07:09 PM	#50
Jacoby 'The Flapper' Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: New York Posts: 2,647	Yes, they're getting better and better. Good work. Keep practicing as Sarah has said. Keep posting them too. __________________ I'm only here to remind Brad to take his protein pills daily.

03-08-2004, 07:35 PM	#51
DefyingGravity Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 344	Well, at least you can tell who they are. __________________ 27th Member of Keira Knightley's Posse

10-08-2004, 06:01 PM	#57
keira loves lipgloss Easily Excited Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: UK Posts: 250	great drawing,keep up the good work __________________ Keira Loves Lipgloss*~#

22-07-2004, 04:24 AM	#41
pills Guest Posts: n/a	Not bad, but the neck needs to be WAY thinner, alot less chin, her face needs to get thinner towards the bottom as well, the bridge of her nose needs to be thinner as well, eyes could be a tad lower, give her some ears, eyes are supposed to be an eye width apart... thats about it Try a few drawings that focus on her outline and not on value (shading) also compare the actual picture to your drawing and try to see what you could improve on

22-07-2004, 05:14 PM	#42
Ardnax Sexy kitten Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Sweden Posts: 645	You actually see a bit of one ear if it would have been a better scan and you can't see the other ear in the real pic either.

23-07-2004, 07:23 PM	#43
Adebe90 Guest Posts: n/a	It was really a great drawing of Keira from the premiere of Pirates of the Carribean exept from her face, but the rest was like looking at a picture

23-07-2004, 09:02 PM	#44
Ardnax Sexy kitten Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Sweden Posts: 645	I drawed the first pic from a VERY small pic so I couldn't see the details in the face, I should have done only the stomach then.

03-08-2004, 06:55 PM	#49
Sarah Nice Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Grimsby, Lincolnshire, England Posts: 1,020	I don't think it looks an awful lot like Keira, but I do think it is very good. You've got her eyebrows right and your shading is coming along nicely. Keep practising and you'll soon have a spitting image of Keira.

03-08-2004, 11:48 PM	#52
Renegade Stock Boy Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 794	A little work on the chin and cheek structure and it'll be fine. You'll definitely improve with every drawing. Keep em coming and eventually you'll hit the spot. Good work .

04-08-2004, 12:28 AM	#53
Hazzle Sponsored Cunt Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 5,168	Improvement made...room for further improvement.

04-08-2004, 09:28 AM	#54
duckula Nobler in the mind. Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,214	Still looks like a man.

10-08-2004, 06:03 PM	#58
AureaMediocritas Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Paris 15 (yeehaa) Posts: 319	You are getting better ! Nice picture except perhaps for the teeth that remind me a bit of lettuce and carrot eaters ... Anyway , if I had to draw such a piece , you would definitely have something to laugh at for hours , so don't be shy and keep them coming !!!

10-08-2004, 11:44 PM	#59
duckula Nobler in the mind. Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 1,214	Ok, movement has been made towards making it look female but seemingly at the cost of making it look severely retarded. Keep up the fine work.

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