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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: ENGLAND . LONDON
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HI , GUYS , I AM A NEW MEMBER WHO LOVE KEIRA VERY MUCH , AND I CAN NOT LIVE A DAY WITHOUT SEE HERE , OK I NEVER LONG MY SPEECH , I PRESENT MYSELF , MAGED ONZ , 19 \ M
NOW , I GIVE FOR YOU A GOOD WORDS ABOUT LOVE ****************************************** I'm the one who always believed in the idea of patience in times of trouble. And I am the one who always said that love lives long. Since love had taken us both so much, And And since the beauty of the world was ours. We never thought that it would spite us. since the beauty of the world was ours. We never thought that it would spite us. Or that the days would separate us. And we lived in love, day by day. And tomorrow was always a dream And, no wonder, it was all an illusion. And she left without saying goodbye. She wounded my heart, I stayed up many a night And my eyes never found rest And where can we find the patience that will cure us? He who was beaten by love before us should tell us! She left without saying goodbye. My darling, I swear, you're still my darling. I swear, even if you've forgotten me. I swear, I can never forget my darling. Can you try to remember me? Try to remember me. If you walk on a path that we once walked upon. Or pass by a place that we shared a memory in. Can you try to remember me? Try to remember me. These nights we lived, I can never forget. They stay on my mind, my darling. And where can we find the patience that will cure us? And you, too, stay on my mind. On my mind as the sun rises and sets. On my mind, day and night, my darling. We split up but why? And we suffered. Tell me why? Tell me, tell me. Because of doubt, my darling? From the things people said of me. Because of jealousy, my darling? See what jealousy has done to me? My darling, no matter how long I yearn. I will still call you "My Darling". They stay on my mind, my darling. On my mind, day and night, my darling On my mind as the sun rises and sets. And you, too, stay on my mind. And where can we find the patience that will cure us? He who was beaten by love before us should tell us! She left without saying goodbye. Our separation all those nights caused me so much pain. I stayed up longing, Yearning deprived me every night. So many days were lost, my god! Suffering and in pain, staying up with no sleep. I spent the nights, with the moon and the stars. And we spoke much. I spoke much of you. Trying to find a reason why you left. Please swear to me now. Can you try to remember me? Come, come, come, come, come Let the sun and our smile, Rise and fill our world with light. Come, come, come, come, come. Why should we say separation is imminent? When love is in front of our eyes? Why submit to heartbreak and say we were cheated? Why say we were cheated? Come, come, come, come, come. Let the world see our joy. Let the world tell our tale. Come, come, come, come, come. you who are far away from me, I wish one day you'd hear my cry. And if you can't come to me again. And if you've forgotten my past and forgotten my place. I WAIT YOUR REPLIES , THANKS |
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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wtf??
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Join Date: Aug 2004
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Either that or dirty lymrics such as
There once was a fencer named Bates He did the fandango on skates One day he fell on his cutlass which rendered him nutless and practically useless on dates :P
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eternally screwed
Join Date: Aug 2004
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That was brilliant, dirty poetry always warms the heart.
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: ENGLAND . LONDON
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Ok . My Poetry Is Dirty , Lets See Your Good Poetry , Men Said That Is Big To Do ............!!!!............
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: River of Painted Birds
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Quote:
I think you just ruined the words "my darling" for me. It was too cheesy, too long, you repeated yourself too often, and....I don't know.
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