The JenR - Keira Knightley.com Forums
Keira Knightley.com Forums  

Go Back   Keira Knightley.com Forums > Wavefront Community > The Gallery

The Gallery Show off your creative talents here!

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 15-10-2007, 12:26 AM   Senior Registered Member #1
JenR
on loan from np.com
 
JenR's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: TX
Posts: 439
The JenR

this is MY thread, i'll post w/e in it... whcih will most liekly be my art work, and whatever is on my mind. They'll be more bitching, I dont like taking out my angery on other people, so this'll be where i vent myself.



*copy and pastes*

I've got an idea for a new story/script to write. I woke up with it one morning and laid in my bed for an hour until i visualized the whole story.


heres the idea:
  • It's going to start off with a love scene, of the couple, they descuss their future and say their 'promises' to eacher other.

    reason why: The boyfriend's going to be shipped off to fight in a war.

    After the boyfriend leaves, the girlfriends finds out she's pregnant. She has no one and nothing, but a house to help her. But neighbors try to help her out.

    after the girlfriend has her baby(a boy), she is told that her man has been killed by an explosion and theirs no way to find his body.

    Years later this gentalman who works at a grocery store, meets her and tries to help her out.

    They later begin to have an affair.

    One day when girlfriend and new guy walk in her house, her boyfriend, lost from war, is sitting in the kitchen.

    -all hell breaks loose-
What do you think?
__________________
bouncy bouncy, jiggle jiggle, sling sling, wobble wobble, clap clap... 'puh puh'
MySpace.com | deviantART.com
I am the best newbie ever to sign up on this forum...
JenR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 15-10-2007, 12:41 AM   First Class Member KKWiki Contributer Administrator #2
Mandy
Honourary Brit
 
Mandy's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Dorothyville, USA
Posts: 3,400
*moved to correct section*
Mandy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 15-10-2007, 12:45 AM   Senior Registered Member #3
JenR
on loan from np.com
 
JenR's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: TX
Posts: 439
i need to get a new idea for the story.
__________________
bouncy bouncy, jiggle jiggle, sling sling, wobble wobble, clap clap... 'puh puh'
MySpace.com | deviantART.com
I am the best newbie ever to sign up on this forum...
JenR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 15-10-2007, 01:02 AM   Senior Registered Member #4
JenR
on loan from np.com
 
JenR's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: TX
Posts: 439
i've made about i dont feel ike counting sigs in the past 24 hours.






(very old ava i made)


ava of myself:



Me and Mandy agree that this ava's looks are diversed enough to support the gay community:



I just had deja vu, typing that.
__________________
bouncy bouncy, jiggle jiggle, sling sling, wobble wobble, clap clap... 'puh puh'
MySpace.com | deviantART.com
I am the best newbie ever to sign up on this forum...
JenR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 15-10-2007, 08:04 AM   Lifetme Service Award Officer #5
Leonie
Elle
 
Leonie's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2003
Location: Nottingham
Posts: 2,631
Quote:
Originally Posted by JenR View Post
this is MY thread, i'll post w/e in it... whcih will most liekly be my art work, and whatever is on my mind. They'll be more bitching, I dont like taking out my angery on other people, so this'll be where i vent myself.



*copy and pastes*

I've got an idea for a new story/script to write. I woke up with it one morning and laid in my bed for an hour until i visualized the whole story.


heres the idea:
  • It's going to start off with a love scene, of the couple, they descuss their future and say their 'promises' to eacher other.

    reason why: The boyfriend's going to be shipped off to fight in a war.

    After the boyfriend leaves, the girlfriends finds out she's pregnant. She has no one and nothing, but a house to help her. But neighbors try to help her out.

    after the girlfriend has her baby(a boy), she is told that her man has been killed by an explosion and theirs no way to find his body.

    Years later this gentalman who works at a grocery store, meets her and tries to help her out.

    They later begin to have an affair.

    One day when girlfriend and new guy walk in her house, her boyfriend, lost from war, is sitting in the kitchen.

    -all hell breaks loose-
What do you think?
It sounds a little bit like the love story in Pearl Harbour. That said, you may be able to develop it in such a way that it doesn't echo the movie so much.
__________________
Leonie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 16-10-2007, 01:17 AM   Senior Registered Member #6
JenR
on loan from np.com
 
JenR's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: TX
Posts: 439
i've never seen Pearl Harbor.. Im not much of a Ben Affleck / Josh Hartnet fan.

I have to really really work on improving this story. i should probably watch Pearl Harbor and make sure i dont add the same things.


I'm debating if the could should be married or not. Alls I know is that I want them to be young people. Younger people are immature and do more stupid things.

Not sure if i want then to be 18-20year olds, or 21-26year olds.
__________________
bouncy bouncy, jiggle jiggle, sling sling, wobble wobble, clap clap... 'puh puh'
MySpace.com | deviantART.com
I am the best newbie ever to sign up on this forum...
JenR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 16-10-2007, 01:31 AM   First Class Member KKWiki Contributer Administrator #7
Mandy
Honourary Brit
 
Mandy's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Dorothyville, USA
Posts: 3,400
I have to agree with Leonie, it sounds exactly like Pearl Harbor. You should check it out.
Mandy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 16-10-2007, 01:56 AM   Senior Registered Member #8
JenR
on loan from np.com
 
JenR's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: TX
Posts: 439
what's it about, besides the title?


in DETAILS please. lol
__________________
bouncy bouncy, jiggle jiggle, sling sling, wobble wobble, clap clap... 'puh puh'
MySpace.com | deviantART.com
I am the best newbie ever to sign up on this forum...
JenR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 16-10-2007, 02:43 AM   First Class Member KKWiki Contributer Administrator #9
Mandy
Honourary Brit
 
Mandy's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Dorothyville, USA
Posts: 3,400
It's just like what you wrote, only the girl is pregnant when her boyfriend comes back (with his best friend's child). Then in the end, the guy who got her pregnant dies, and she and her original boyfriend are together.
Mandy is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump


All times are GMT. The time now is 12:44 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
By appointment to HM Keira Knightley.