|14-07-2004, 07:00 AM||#1|
Join Date: Jun 2004
I ask thee, moon, who shines at night,
“Why dost thou show a stolen light?
Why must thou hide behind the clouds
And creep behind the misty shrouds?”
Thou hast a light that is not thine:
A void of warmth, a shade of shine.
Thou look’st upon the whole of earth:
What dost thou care of gloom or mirth?
I see within thy dark exchange
An emptiness that cannot change;
As full and bright thou art this eve,
No other light could mourn or grieve.
The stars are gone from where I lay,
And still thou art the one to stay.
I see thy face in sad despair,
As one thy face would feelings share.
But never have I seen thee cry;
No tears are witnessed in the sky.
The clouds, they hide thy painful drops
But leave when once the sadness stops.
Why art thou paler than a ghost,
Still with a loneliness to boast?
Dost thou the clearest sky still haunt?
Dost thou thy stolen gift still want?
Does age remake a lover’s lull –
An emptiness that was, now full?
Or does it leave without a tear,
Forever darkness e’er to fear?
Is that the reason thou hast light?
Thy own was taken in the night?
And now thou art my only friend,
For now I feel a similar end.
"I like refried beans. That's why I want to try fried beans, because maybe they're just as good, and we're just wasting time." - Mitch Hedberg (1968-2005)
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|18-07-2004, 03:53 PM||#2|
Join Date: Jul 2004
So this is the legendary Dragon Rat -- the poet master. All your work is great in my opinion but I'm not a connoisseur of poetry. If I'm not mistaken you wrote on other boards as well. Fairy Girl I and II among others, right? I liked Darkness the most.
Ernest Hemingway once wrote, "The world is a fine place and worth fighting for." I agree with the second part. - Morgan Freeman, Se7en
|18-07-2004, 05:30 PM||#3|
Join Date: Jun 2004
Not as good as Distant Love...but nonetheless yet another cracking effort. Lovely imagery, but I think DL read better, and also I think the sentiments expressed in DL were more easy to associate with.
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