It's very nice work.
The only criticism I can muster would be that I'd like to see a little fill flash on the dog's face. He sort of gets washed out in the shadow.
I love the dune shot. Beautiful color saturation.
"Purgatory's kind of like the in-betweeny one. You weren't really shit, but you weren't all that great either. Like Tottenham."
I'll try being nicer...if you'll try being smarter.