how is victor related to jack the captain of potc?
kidding aside, it is interesting. you are creative and a potential one. why not try it to be a novel type. put dialogues. consult military strategists and tacticians, mix it with realistic historical accounts.
try to make the President to be female and make it better. if producers' interests are caught by your piece, make it a condition the lead role should be for keira and no other than her.
promise me once it is filmed. you will give me two complimentary premier night tickets.
critics will make you better even the best. do not be discouraged.