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i think there's still too much bright area at the top... your eye is naturally drawn to the lighter area of a picture, but the major subject area is in the lower section of the picture.
oh... and you should never have a diagonal come directly out of the corner... it just never works well. (unless you're ansel adams or something haha)
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