Originally Posted by Ardnax
It's okay Haz, everybody has the right to their opinion. As long it isn't off topic.
Glad to hear it...to be fair...the stomach isn't bad...but the face, the shoulders, the arm the fingers...a fair bit of it needs work. It's been ages since I've done any sketching or painting, but yeah, I'd suggest working on the form first. Shading is less important than ensuring the form actually fits the subject. Oh...and the hair...needs work.