Maybe I didn't mention it, but I'm not "seriously" writing this screenplay. If I got bored, I might write the whold thing out, but I surely wouldn't try to sell, I'd simply write it for shits and giggles. I'm not dreaming of Academy Awards here...
I had planned for a lot of character development to come out of the woodwork during the first cafe scene. And several more scenes would have to be added, because as it is right now, the film would be pretty short. My only real drive to complete the screenplay would be to see the car chase scene. We came up with some pretty awesome ideas for it.
I usually lose interest in things like this before I finish them, so I doubt a finished version of that idea would ever see the light of day. I tried writing a screenplay for Metal Gear Solid once, but the plane crashed before it even got out of the hangar, if you know what I mean.