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Old 14-07-2004, 01:47 PM   Attended an OMGWTFKKWBBQ! KKWiki Contributer Senior Registered Member #5
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Okaaay. Think it needs a LOT of work chaps...seems more than a little samey and shallow...any ideas on how you could add some soul and depth to the characters?
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