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The Moon
I ask thee, moon, who shines at night,
“Why dost thou show a stolen light? Why must thou hide behind the clouds And creep behind the misty shrouds?” Thou hast a light that is not thine: A void of warmth, a shade of shine. Thou look’st upon the whole of earth: What dost thou care of gloom or mirth? I see within thy dark exchange An emptiness that cannot change; As full and bright thou art this eve, No other light could mourn or grieve. The stars are gone from where I lay, And still thou art the one to stay. I see thy face in sad despair, As one thy face would feelings share. But never have I seen thee cry; No tears are witnessed in the sky. The clouds, they hide thy painful drops But leave when once the sadness stops. Why art thou paler than a ghost, Still with a loneliness to boast? Dost thou the clearest sky still haunt? Dost thou thy stolen gift still want? Does age remake a lover’s lull – An emptiness that was, now full? Or does it leave without a tear, Forever darkness e’er to fear? Is that the reason thou hast light? Thy own was taken in the night? And now thou art my only friend, For now I feel a similar end. |
So this is the legendary Dragon Rat -- the poet master. All your work is great in my opinion but I'm not a connoisseur of poetry. If I'm not mistaken you wrote on other boards as well. Fairy Girl I and II among others, right? I liked Darkness the most.
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Not as good as Distant Love...but nonetheless yet another cracking effort. Lovely imagery, but I think DL read better, and also I think the sentiments expressed in DL were more easy to associate with.
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