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Ardnax
04-10-2006, 08:12 AM
But I think you'll find that I have improved a bit at least :icon_razz

The past (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19705410/?qo=49&q=by%3Alexidevil&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)

Now (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/30245994/?qo=12&q=by%3Alexidevil&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)

Still not that good but hey, I'm trying. Might aswell show another drawing that's not Keira.

Click if you dare (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28327890/?qo=13&q=by%3Alexidevil&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Martijn Slegers
04-10-2006, 08:56 AM
Nice work! They look really good! :) Keep it up!

I also have made some portraits, maybe you could take a look at them and tell me what you think?

http://whieee.nl/~martijn/MartijnSlegersAmbigramateur/Portraits.html

Have a nice day!

Martijn Slegers

www.whieee.nl/~martijn
deviljet88
04-10-2006, 10:27 AM
Had to tilt my laptop screen a bit to see the detail because its so lightly done, but you've definitely improved, nice job.
hasselbrad
04-10-2006, 12:56 PM
Huge improvement. Your technique has become much more subtle, especially around the eyes. One suggestion I have is to treat the eyelashes as a solid mass rather than individually.
Ardnax
04-10-2006, 01:01 PM
Thank you :)

Martijn your portraits are really nice.

Hasselbrad I'll think about that. I've got huge problems with eyelashes.
hasselbrad
04-10-2006, 02:55 PM
Thank you :)

Martijn your portraits are really nice.

Hasselbrad I'll think about that. I've got huge problems with eyelashes.

Most people do. Use the 9B along the eyelid and smudge the edge away from the eye. It should give you a light, feathery appearance.
Ardnax
05-10-2006, 05:08 AM
I have to try that, thanks for the tip! :)